Editorial: variable used before being defined in sub-clause 8.8.3.5

[LiZhang]

Variables i, j are used before being defined.
In sub-clause 8.8.3.5, the following text are defined:

– If edgeType is equal to EDGE_VER,
xDi = ( i * gridSize ) (1228)
yDj = cIdx = = 0 ? ( j << 2 ) : ( j << 1 ) (1229)
...

– Otherwise (edgeType is equal to EDGE_HOR),
xDi = cIdx = = 0 ? ( i << 2 ) : ( i << 1 ) (1232)
yDj = j * gridSize (1233)
...

For xDi with i = 0..xN and yDj with j = 0..yN, the following applies:
– If edgeFlags[ xDi ][ yDj ] is equal to 0, the variable bS[ xDi ][ yDj ] is set equal to 0.
...

It may be better to derive xDi according to i = 0..xN and to derive yDj according to j = 0..yN.

[jlchen]

Good catch!

How about modified as follows:

"The variables xDi, yDj, xN and yN are derived as follows:" -->

"The variables xDi with i = 0..xN, yDj with j = 0..yN, xN and yN are derived as follows:"

[LiZhang]

It may be better to firstly derive xN and yN; followed by xDi and yDj.

How about:
"The variables xDi, yDj, xN and yN are derived as follows:" -->
"The variables xN and yN are derived as follows:"

Afterwards, add "The variables xDi with i = 0..xN, yDj with j = 0..yN are derived as follows:"
Move the xDi and yDj definitions here.

[jlchen]

You're right. Will take your second solution in JVET-S2001-vF release.